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Martie

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California

0 posted 2004-05-16 02:47 PM

Mock Orange

I’m temperate place me in the middle
where there is rhythm in air
breathing in and out of trees
a longing to touch but can't stay place
must move
the grove just titillate
then on to meadow dotted with the thought
of kiss just one

plant me there against the wall undone

Shiver felt
a shadow falls across the earthen floor
and innocent is covered
her veil a gossamer gray not stern
hold attention there
for to turn would tease delight
of not knowing if shadows is warm or fright

There is a song within the night
misunderstood the cold the damp
to embrace midnight calm with you
and tremble thus the morning dew
I will remain
but I do better in the sun
clinging to the dry of dirt
bringing subtle fragrance into air
to embrace spring in blossom there

So shy the small white petal of my display
grasp your hand with cut of me
for to fill the vase of your demand
is to know the essence of my adaptability

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

1 posted 2004-05-16 02:53 PM

~ and as a writer, Poetessa Bella, I am well aware of your "adaptability"!

EA

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-05-16 02:54 PM

There is a song within the night
misunderstood the cold the damp
to embrace midnight calm with you
and tremble thus the morning dew
I will remain
but I do better in the sun

~*~

I miss the mock orange of my home...
and all of the happiness
that held up the foundations...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2004-05-16 03:27 PM

The way you turn common words in magical
exclamations amazes me, always has. A
signature trademark of our Martie!!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

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walking the surreal

4 posted 2004-05-16 03:56 PM

This is a as lovely a write as that of the mock orange itself, whose blossoms are truly one of my favorie parts of Spring.

Susan

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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-05-16 03:57 PM

OMG!! So beautiful dear Martie!
One day I wish to be able to write like you!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

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in the shadows

6 posted 2004-05-16 04:36 PM

"There is a song within the night
misunderstood the cold the damp
to embrace midnight calm with you"

passing shadows
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displaced

7 posted 2004-05-16 05:23 PM

awesome!

Dark Angel
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8 posted 2004-05-16 07:57 PM

I feel an intimacy within this Martie, you're simply amazing.

it's a keeper.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2004-05-16 09:14 PM

MartiesqueMoments~
The fragrance of your verse stays with me long after the read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

10 posted 2004-05-16 11:22 PM

I second the (e)motion.....

A beautiful expression, this -- I wish I could say it as well as you.

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GlisteningRain
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since 2004-05-06

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The clouds

11 posted 2004-05-16 11:27 PM

Your words throb in my heart. Eyes absorbing a maze of beauty.

- B

Alwye

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In the space between moments

12 posted 2004-05-16 11:52 PM

Martie, you continue to be one of my all time favorite poets. Emily Dickenson, Robert Frost, Amy Clampitt, Dylan Thomas, and you.

Once again, I've been swept away in your words.

~*Krista Lee Knutson*~

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of time like dew on the tip of a leaf.
~Rabindranath Tagore

Janet Marie
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13 posted 2004-05-17 08:55 AM

There is a song within the night
misunderstood the cold the damp
to embrace midnight calm with you
and tremble thus the morning dew
I will remain
but I do better in the sun
clinging to the dry of dirt
bringing subtle fragrance into air
to embrace spring in blossom there

====================================

you are the pips botanical garden...

this is a superb write of visual and all the other senses are stimulated as well...
you know this tree-hugging moth loves this write.

I love you more the further I go ...
before this existence ... you were always here inside of me.

Nelly Furtado

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Ohio, USA

14 posted 2004-05-30 01:59 PM

Martie - you paint the images and the touch and the fragrance of the flowers in our minds and hearts as no other can do - this is just wonderful - Paul

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

15 posted 2004-05-30 02:08 PM

Martie
Excellance is no stranger for your words.

MGROVES

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Posts 3802
california

16 posted 2004-05-30 03:39 PM

excellant

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