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Open Poetry #32

Empty space

Fariegirl
Member

since 2003-02-05

Posts 147

0 posted 2004-04-17 07:24 PM

Every day I wake up,
And do the things I do,
I put on my make-up,
And end up missing you.

No matter how I start each day,
No matter how I try,
No matter how much I pray,
I will always cry.

Why'd you have to take those pills?
Why'd you cut your wrists?
You always knew that would kill,
Why didn't you resist.

Now I miss you every day,
I always see your face,
No matter what they say,
I'll have this empty space.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2004-04-17 07:49 PM

Wow. Very deep.

~Alli~

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

2 posted 2004-04-17 08:16 PM

sad, yet very nice write. liked it.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-04-22 11:39 AM

Sad thoughts.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-04-22 12:20 PM

losing someone to suicide is a tragic feeling....I know...I lost two.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

5 posted 2004-04-22 12:42 PM

Too sad for words.
JL

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