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Shattered
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Shattered |
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GlisteningRain Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 103The clouds |
Shattered..by a man... like even women shatter.. men nothing like being left to die....out of love.. like I die...out of love with you love being the root I could end my pain..with a sharp point..fragile..through flesh.. when you shake your head I could make me love no longer...with a sharp point...fragile...through flesh don't even she says... I Don't Glorify...Suicide...Only Wish...I Didn't Feel For You...Wish I Couldn't Feel...Like You... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like the format...it's different...theme is good too |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The only way to end a love like that would be a death... Understood that oh so well. TD |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
This speaks of such loss and pain. Well penned. Susan |
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majnu
since 2002-10-13
Posts 1088SF Bay Area |
the formatting was new but I felt it worked. well done. -majnu |
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