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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2004-05-15 09:47 AM



Wearing Little

It's so peaceful here today,
I can daydream in pastel,
the first in a long time.

The humming of the washer and dryer,
a rhythm to my thoughts.

Ceiling fans on low,
to swirl the warmth of air,
on this too hot day in May.

Me, skimping on the wear,
allowing the moment to touch.

I can almost taste happiness,
can almost walk the fancy,
leave the storms behind...


almost


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2004-05-15 09:51 AM


i know you are staying grounded, but it is really nice to "read" how pleasantly the day is touching you....very comforting M...very nice
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2 posted 2004-05-15 09:51 AM



almost...and the title is telling
if one knows
the background...

keeping thoughts with you, little one.

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2004-05-15 09:57 AM


leave go the almost
and take the pastel's moment
yes!!

Enchantress
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4 posted 2004-05-15 10:02 AM


almost...

Still holding you in my thoughts...
Enjoy a peaceful moment or two Maureen.
Heart Hugs.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2004-05-15 12:53 PM


Hugs M...
This is wonderful. Wishing you all pastel mornings.
TD

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6 posted 2004-05-15 02:06 PM


sounds like you're on your way now!
JL
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7 posted 2004-05-15 02:28 PM


Ooooh, I peeked.  Made me blush.  Very nice write.
Enjoyed.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


JamesMichael
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8 posted 2004-05-16 10:39 PM


Almost is good...James
Susan
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9 posted 2004-05-16 10:53 PM


It's so peaceful here today,
I can daydream in pastel,
the first in a long time.

Daydream in pastel, love this.  This poem makes such simple everyday things seem like small treasures.  Very nice.

Susan

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10 posted 2004-05-16 11:53 PM


You paint a nice picture, Maureen....very nice indeed
GlisteningRain
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11 posted 2004-05-17 12:06 PM


Daydream in pastel. I think I love you..j/k It just sounds so...erotic yet romantic and beautiful.

- B

nakdthoughts
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12 posted 2004-05-17 06:34 PM


thank you everyone...the other day I just sat and relaxed reading here with the fans blowing softly...thinking only pleasant thoughts *s

M

and Glistening one...you made me smile~

passing shadows
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13 posted 2004-07-04 12:38 PM


these days are so few and far between...
I enjoy them too when they come

LeeJ
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14 posted 2004-07-06 03:08 PM


I can almost taste happiness,
can almost walk the fancy,
leave the storms behind...
You go girl!  Lovely

Artic Wind
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15 posted 2007-11-11 12:59 PM


Enjoyed


ARCTIC WIND

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