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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2004-05-15 04:38 AM


Dare you look? Within yourself?
Explore your inner being, find
the fantasy, lay back and daydream.
Look into the dusty mansions of your mind.

Open the doors of illusion,
search each room, what is
within each? A long forgotten
memory? Or maybe something you want to bury?

Each room leads to a room,
objects lay untouched.Emotions
locked behind each door, open
them, free the emotions, open windows.

Life neatly packed away,
behind closed doors, some rooms
have sun shining outside the window,
while other's have storm clouds skudding by.

Cold fear, freezing to the bone,
demons to confront, just
walk in, stare them down,
confront them all.

Warm open fires project
flames a-dancing on the walls.
Room of love and nostalgia,
memories as precious as jewels.

Be not afraid to open the
doors of the mind, of thought.
Be complete, recognise your
deeply devouring fantasy mind.


''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''-  Dalai Lama

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (05-15-2004 07:16 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-05-15 07:10 AM



Only my poetry dares...
for I am really very shy...

Goldenrose
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2 posted 2004-05-15 07:18 AM


Oh K... you are pulling my leg...you have a strong personality....you dont come across as shy...thank you for the reply...

Goldenrose.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''-  Dalai Lama

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-05-15 12:52 PM


nice thoughts here

a good piece

Ericc
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4 posted 2004-05-15 02:47 PM


Wow....great write!

Eric

A Romantic Heart
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5 posted 2004-05-19 12:42 PM


Only you have the key to every room in my mind...some yet to open...then we could lay back and daydream together...

Thanks for sharing your mind with me~

Love and hugs
~ARH

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

iliana
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6 posted 2004-05-19 02:45 AM


Good writing, Goldenrose.  We will be faced with all our demons at sometime or another, for sure!
Bonnie j
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7 posted 2004-05-19 08:55 AM


Liked this one Goldenrose. I'm afraid if I opened some of the doors of my mind it would be like my stuffed closets and something might hit me in the head.
See Ya
Bon Bon

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