Open Poetry #32 |
Poetic Thirsting |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Poetic Thirsting It's not often I allow myself seen in this condition. Through and through, I'm doused with thought when I am on this mission. Back and forth and round and round, the motor always whirring. And as I push and pull and turn, poetic mind is stirring. Slow it comes until I'm soaked and salted into drenching. But do I drink of water? Not...instead I sit here quenching. M **was worried that this might be misinterpreted and possibly sent to Mature... but I was mowng the lawn earlier "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
i like it just where it is |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzBliss~ Love the word-whirring~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks Helen...and Margie...boy are we having your kind of weather..almost 90's in May... for a week aready...my body is trying to adjust from the 60's the few days before. M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes hot here as well Maureen.... Seems we missed Spring this year. Well done. Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Cool! JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I can still feel the vibration of the lawn mower in the rhythm, M. Great write! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I know, your were fantasizing about me...right?...NO?....LOL...I like it right where it's at too...(of course, right here next to me on my select comfort mattress would even be better? |
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