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Did You Know I Rain?
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Did You Know I Rain? |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Did You Know I Rain? I have felt you in my bones and recognize your voice softly above the thunder my sheets scream your skin where loneliness and alone is far deeper than the darkness night is just the other side of day finding life slowly suspended here in a fresh supply of daily water I soon need to release this pour rhyming patterns of droplets fall no need to deny the action of clouds dried from a drum in sky beat distance is such a heavy storm when lightening strikes with rain |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
love your thoughts this evening, Helen..I hope you are progressing well hugs M |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlick~ 'distance is such a heavy storm' Oh my ... what a line-of-thought~ Love the word-pour~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Helen....much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
helen, I did not know you rain. But I did know you rule!  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I have felt you in my bones This line holds such depth. Enjoyed the entire write. Susan |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Don't know how I missed this one, Helen, but I'm glad I saw it. The anaologies were great! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow! This is a stunning write. Enjoyed very much. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful... |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Rain??? Why, I bet you can hurricane!!! I like this picture. (of course, I liked the others also.) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
 Powerful!!! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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