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Waiting for Sleep to Set In
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Waiting for Sleep to Set In |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving 
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 ` ` ` photo titled "urban swimming-hole" taken by me (muted) |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Lonely, sorrowful, sad, yet beautiful in its longing. Susan |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
OMG Dawn, this is outstanding and I love your pic, reminds me of a place we used to visit... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
words of the depths; yet accessible and touchable to those reading, nicely done |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dawn~ Stunning ... photo and thoughts~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amazing..beautiful..awesome... AND I love it!!!  Hugs pretty lady~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Holy Moly...Dawn, this is stunning, so profound. I love the image as well. yup I'm keeping it M xx The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colours, but the sea, does not change. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Oh this is such a wonderful write. Very sad, yet so much knowledge and understanding. Thanks for sharing. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
you know what? i think you are all awesome  thank you  |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
 beautiful ...buddy just beautiful piece of writting and love what you did with that picture |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! just awesome! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Muted Cuted one -- I see your muse has ahold of you tonight, as well. This one reached down deep into the reservoir of my emotion calling me to sing you a lullaby -- lullaby and good night into billowed clouds slumber come the dawn and morning's light awake on wings of painless flight. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 'muted cuted one'? LOL....hahah, i like that, makes me giggle beautiful lullaby by the way, it almost made me cry...the good kind of cry though! thank you also to Lina and Dixie |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yea sad but awsome |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Lugubrious...but echoing...haunting....but beautiful...very fine writing .... Thank you.... Goldenrose. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dawn, even though this is sad, it's so beautiful... the words, as well as the picture. Hugs, Ethel |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this write echoes through to the core...extremely brilliant, yet, shows a very passion in your soul to understand and care for the hearts of others. Very much enjoyed!!!! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
shows the yearning... deep emote regards sudhir |
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