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Playing In the Heat of the Day ZZ10 |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Climbing so high to burn the shadows away The sun scorched equally both skin and stones Old Zhan rested in the heat of the day Beside where a mountain stream trickled in play Sandals removed and with his feet resting On the brink above the water worn stones Casually the well traveled toes dipping Then comes a little hungry fish nipping Startled at the nip pulls his feet away Startled by the pull fish hides under stones Laughing, sandals in hand is on his way Tossing a few crumbs of bread for fish play. Gloom |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Captivating! Enthralling! A complete delight to read and savor! "Climbing so high to burn the shadows away" ~ how poetic!   EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh...wow |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Ahh what a lovely scene! Beautifully rendered! Love, Margherita  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I reallly see this one -- I hope you are putting art along with these -- maybe you will publish this?? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I see the soft paintings of oriental swish... these are wonderful, Professor... I need to play catchup... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
LOL I used to do that! I really liked this one!"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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