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Poem from song titles
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Poem from song titles |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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I’ve woven the English titles of Sara Brightman’s cd entitled “encore” into a poem just because it’s “one of those days”. In the manadrin’s orchid garden nothing like you’ve ever known dances to the beat of half a moment while the sound of a piano tries to whistle down the wind and turn the flow of air into the music of a soul. There is more to love but what more do I need when I’m away from you and know I must surrender to the last man in my life? But think of me sometimes or maybe take my hand for one more walk around the garden so I can feel inside the way it has to be if I ever fall in love again. Helen / 13 May 2004 |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
very nice  must have been fun to write |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks muted. The writing was fun but the music too emotional. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I know this is very difficult to do...well done, I tried to do this once with some of these songs....but, just didn't have the brain cells... 1. All The Girls That Turn Me On Turn Me Down 2. At The Gas Station of Love, I Got the Self Service Pump 3. Sally Broke My Heart At Walgreens and I Cried all the way to Sears. 4. Get Off The Pool Table Mabel, The Two Dollars is For The Beer. 5. How Can I Get Over You If You Won't Get Out From Under Me? 6. I bought the shoes that walked out on me. 7. I Changed Her Oil, She Changed My Life 8. Balladeer Fell For Her, She Fell For Me, And he fell for LongJohn. 9. I gave her my heart and a diamond and she clubbed me with a spade. 10. I went back to my fourth wife for the third time and gave her a second chance to make a first class fool out of me... Ya see?...These are way too sad too.... |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Toerag, Well, it depends how you look at things as to whether they are sad or not. See above post. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done! very clever! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Neat-O. Enjoyed this one a lot! JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Helen~ You worked these well for an enjoyable read~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks passing shadows and JL. The only rain today was that inside my brain hence the little foray into fantasy! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Helen This is great! Your rain is my reading pleasure. |
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