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A Simple Plea
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A Simple Plea |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving 
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A Simple Plea (A Rondelet) ```````````` Let me believe in something worth suffering for. Let me believe, cross the desert on hands and knees in reach of distant ocean's shore and drink of you and nothing more, Let me believe. [This message has been edited by muted (05-13-2004 04:18 AM).] |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
alot said. i really liked this excellant write |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is beautiful |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A fine poem...i enjoyed reading...thank you... Goldenrose. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Simply beautiful Dawn...  Maree  it's a keeper. The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colours, but the sea, does not change. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Perfectly penned Dawn! Very much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Its so nice to finally have a moment to visit and to find your beautifully penned poem that is brief and powerful.... ~P |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
ah....let me believe too.....wonderful! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I know nothing of forms and such, only what is contained therein. To me, doing forms is like building ships in bottles. Tis enough for me to craft a raft. Nicely done. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nicely written. Excellent. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Simply perfecto!  Beautifully done, Muted One! EA P.S. A pleasure to see your beautiful face smiling back at me! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Such a heartfelt plea, dear Dawn! And so perfectly presented. Beautiful. My own answer to this question is LOVE. Loving you, Margherita |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Muted -- this was beautifully, really beautifully done. ....jo |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Muted, I love this... the simple imagery is powerful in conveying the intended message. |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
I believe it was a mighty fine poem |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
Let me believe..and I do, that you do too! A beautiful write sitting next to a beautiful face! Nicely done and this form is very difficult yet you did it with perfection. Bravo! pictureme :-) |
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akforty7 Junior Member
since 2004-01-10
Posts 18 |
wonderful write! |
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Destinys_Fallen_Angel Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 75Boise Idaho |
good poem you did a great job...keep up the good work Yahoo messenger: destinys_Falen_Angel |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Dawn ... a lovely bit of writing with a huge message in just a few words. My favorite type of poem. Hugs, Marti If you truly love Nature, you will find |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Dawn~ desire and passion...beautifully done...  ~~**~~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
For sure... TD |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love rondelets, they're one of my favorite forms. And this is so well done. It's inspiring. When we believe, the seraphim stand lost in awe. When we believe, angels themselves cannot receive such wondrous gifts-beyond the law: his grace, his love, is what we draw when we believe. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This shows much skill as well as poetic strength! Thank you for sharing it. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
very well done! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
thanks again everyone and Pilgrimage: thank you for such a beautiful response...your rondelet is gorgeous!!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...have hope and believe until the hope is lost...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Simplicity reigns...  but it brings with it, elegance. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Dawn...Great for and such a positive outlook. Enjoyed...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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