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Open Poetry #32

Woman, but his eyes

GlisteningRain
Member

since 2004-05-06

Posts 103
The clouds

0 posted 2004-05-12 03:39 PM

brown orbs: Ignite a flame that burns fire
hair: Wild and frolicking desire
skin: Tan and milkish..fitting perfect morsels
body: Like a luscious void enticing souls to hold her

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2004-05-12 04:01 PM

Wow...
Need a towel for that cold shower??
Whoa!!
Good one!
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-05-12 04:22 PM

Very nice Byron..
Much enjoyed the read.
hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

3 posted 2004-05-12 11:37 PM

alot of sensual writes tonight. oh the memories. thanks for getting the motor started

this was great

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2004-05-12 11:46 PM

WOW

~~**~~
le vent chante avec le calme doux
calme de nuit
sien beauté sur mes lèvres
~~**~~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-05-13 02:21 AM

whew! very descriptive and HOT!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

6 posted 2004-05-14 06:31 PM

Great description of an enchantress!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2004-05-14 06:47 PM

Very, very potent poem - a brew that can't be missed.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2004-05-14 08:27 PM

Enjoyed the sensual sweet of this.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2004-05-14 11:15 PM

ByronLandry,Jr~
Enjoyed the steamy condensation on my monitor~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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