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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Form Poetry Oh this one? Tetractys? So difficult to hold in my mind a poetry form when the clabbered sky drips cold memories, drizzles old hopes to freeze my aching chest. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Nan~ Not only is this GREAT ... but, 'clabbered sky' ... oh my~ Haven't heard that from anyone but my great grandmother ... I've often seen that sky and lens-captured it, but couldn't find the words to bring it to life~ Thank you for this~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Forming Poetry Words Arranged In manners Which brings to mind Shapes of other things Like a wave cresting high To recede back again To where it came Vanishing In the Form Gloom |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
clabbered sky brings to mind clotted cream... well done, Nan! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice indeed! JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nicely done! I admire you |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Marge, thanks girl. We don't often get those clouds here, but they bring out something in me. Prof, thank you for your wave! Sunshine, JL, and Shadows, thanks for reading it guys. I appreciate your replies. Sometimes I think I just post these things into nowhere, and you let me know there's someone out there. Thanks for that. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoyed your non-con'form'ist free flow of thoughts in this write!  EA |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 one is upside down! LOLyou know i love tetractys very nice |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
EA- Thanks!muted-I do too. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
So, is it cold where you live, even in May? Short, but to the point and enjoyable, indeed. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
We had a little bitty cold spell, with a cloudy sky going on for a bit. Usually it's in the 90's around here. I'm glad you like the poem. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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