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Open Poetry #32
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MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16
Posts 190
Ireland
0 posted 2004-05-12 08:43 AM

On the third day the fighting had finally stopped.

The victors returned to higher ground,

The fallen banished Hell-bound.

Awaiting them was chaos and pandemonium.

The vanquished arrived in total despair,

Now they are to live their nightmare.

Once, their name had envisaged awe and beauty.

Now they are shadows of their former self,

Redemption, no longer an option for thyself.
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Opeth
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since 2001-12-13
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The Ravines
1 posted 2004-05-13 11:00 PM

This reminded me of the movie, Braveheart... after the first big battle. Original and cool.
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
2 posted 2004-05-14 12:53 PM

War is hell, is it not!  Enjoyed.
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