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Breath on Stone
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Breath on Stone |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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{That his words have stirred this heart} This, his last picture -- taken while rain falls puddles gathering quietly winds settle into silence black stretches horizons breathing in He there too--the ache of hand and stone shadows that never last -- placing you there -- beauty filling eyes naked – open &Venus is weeping for the taste of salt upon your tongue Under palms of quieter times you have felt the wind submerged in the waters these the same around my soul If you sleep seep the ashes of warmth as if, you were never alone while the sky stirs the hue dream This is what I want you to see faces in the unseen corner blue & green tears the way oceans breathe sand passing shades of softer palettes Soon the moon will rise & remind me between crimson & amber stages How remains the dust of breath on stone ~~**~~ {Greatly Inspired and Muse Dedicated} ~~**~~ le vent chante avec le calme doux calme de nuit sien beauté sur mes lèvres ~~**~~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Beautiful flow of words. Susan |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
pure beauty |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Grand |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have no words...just a sigh |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
He there too--the ache of hand and stone shadows that never last -- placing you there -- beauty filling eyes naked – open &Venus is weeping for the taste of salt upon your tongue ....Wow Lauren. M  The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colours, but the sea, does not change. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
As always..absolutely breathtaking Lauren. I'm awaiting the book. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
This, his last picture -- taken while rain falls puddles gathering quietly winds settle into silence black stretches horizons Fantastic intro |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
stunning, sheer beauty flowing like lace curtains in an ocean breeze...opulance! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Greatly inspired, indeed... from a muse, with love... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Heartfelt words. Very emotional read. Enjoyed. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
.......... sigh........ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If you sleep seep the ashes of warmth as if, you were never alone while the sky stirs the hue dream This is what I want you to see faces in the unseen corner blue & green tears the way oceans breathe sand passing shades of softer palettes Soon the moon will rise & remind me between crimson & amber stages How remains the dust of breath on stone ======================== yeah... what Capt said...... SIGH If you sleep seep the ashes of warmth as if, you were never alone while the sky stirs the hue SIGH High inspire...yessssssss indeed.... beautiful, exquisite, ethereal, haunting, I need to find new words to do your writing justice as it does my spirit.  I love you more the further I go ... before this existence ... you were always here inside of me. Nelly Furtado |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I have a wonderful muse, thank you for letting me share these words with you....I appreciate you all....  ~~**~~ |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
LOL...I was just going to say, "that must be SOME muse". |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"the ache of hand and stone shadows that never last"... "& Venus is weeping for the taste of salt upon your tongue" ~ Gosh, you're goooooood!  Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A wonderful stirring of the heart! Exquisite writing. Love, Margherita |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ahhhh....L~ Lovely.....so lovely.....so you.... |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lauren So gracefully you weave emotion into poetic power. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I read this the other day... I read it a few times... and it gets better with each read, especially since I do believe where the thoughts behind the words are coming from. Enjoyed! |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
This made me breathless...the way that something incredibly gorgeous does. I absolutely love it. ~*Krista Lee Knutson*~ |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"This is what I want you to see faces in the unseen corner blue & green tears the way oceans breathe sand passing shades of softer palettes Soon the moon will rise & remind me between crimson & amber stages How remains the dust of breath on stone" Thank your muse for me, okay?! |
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