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For the Dandelions
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For the Dandelions |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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It's their crowning time; they've arrived; wings spread over the meadows of may, wearing wide open faces like schoolchildren, you could almost hear them sing, watch their expression as you acknowledge their existence, a choir of white atop the kingdom of green, make a wish, won't you? how could anyone pass them by? knowing their time comes and goes with the blink of a few more sunsets, they skip with glee over the land they call home for now; as soon they will reabsorb in the divine light, shattering any doubts of a girl's dream of the world eternal. [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (05-12-2004 03:04 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice imagery |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just noticed.... when did you scoot on past 4000? Congrats on your 4,000 post achievement!  You've put a lot of heart into this place Michele |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks dix; i never noticed  but i thank you for the support and good thoughts you and the other poets of pips do send out to me |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful post Michele... Congratulations on the milestone! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you for the dandelion delight! I love dandelions even tho' they are considered the scourge of lawn-lovers! lol  Linda |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This was just wonderful! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
make a wish, won't you? how could anyone pass them by? Memories of childhood delight, blowing dandelions. Nice. Susan |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Very nice. A good weed killer will get rid of the dandelions though |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks guys and bboy, ouch..... o now i know, they get in the way on the green i guess. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I saw this earlier and just had to come back to celebrate its freshness and your 4,000th post! Congratulations |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks sadelite for noticing too |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You know, I love the way you see the world... Was thinking of this very theme, pertaining to our own small seeds cast to the winds... Something reaffirming about the yellow capped green fields. TD |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I agree. A very delightful read. JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
knowing their time comes and goes with the blink of a few more sunsets, *applause* I really love that! Thanks for dreaming along with me, girlie~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh, I am so happy, Blueserenade brought this back! You are magical, sweet Michelle! This touches my heart in its delicate, ethereal beauty. It wanders in my library to be savored again ... It's so after my heart! Love and hugs. Margherita oh ... and congratulations on your 4000th! Always wonderful posts and replies! Thank you. |
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