AT least the rain hides my TEARS

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Open Poetry #32

AT least the rain hides my TEARS

MERCURY
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

0 posted 2004-05-11 06:54 AM

I’m freefalling ,

Into the abyss,

I wish I had been more neutral,

Just like the Swiss.

Why did I kill all the good inside me?

Tortured words from a troubled mind,

I guess that’s the story off mankind.

Despairs cold grip is tugging at me,

I’ve been cursed just like the fig tree.

At least the rain hides my tears.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-05-11 10:26 AM

gripping good write, thank you for sharing.

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

2 posted 2004-05-11 10:51 AM

The rain of tears can also cure the soul in despair....Strong words that tell of strong emotions...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2004-05-11 11:02 AM

Ah, yes. The rain can hide the tears, but it can also wash the sting from our eyes.

Some very clever lines in this poem.

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