Open Poetry #32 |
Earth Angel (for my mother) |
IndigoEve Member
since 2003-01-10
Posts 279Etched in the illusion of time |
Balanced upon the breath of time, God created angels Beautiful creatures, hair brushed golden by sunrise They drifted along through silver mist Undaunted in the wake of iniquity below them Precious beings, crystalline in form Heaven's own daughters, fated to be the guardians of mortality Twined midst archaic hymns of loneliness, they sang Oh, to hear such sweetness 'twas truly a blessed thing! As the years slowly faded into eternity, a rift in destiny was found One single angel was left stranded on dusty soil Exquisitely lost Radiantly humble How she came to be my mother, I never knew But earth angel, she is...greatest of them all. If I were to touch you, would you bleed a velvet river, running miracles through the sodden ground? --Moi |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful gift |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
She is an angel, and wonderful for her to know you know! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A magical tribute to your Mom. She is surely delighted by her daughter poetess! Love, Margherita |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is simply amazing... I am sure she is very proud! ~~**~~ le vent chante avec le calme doux calme de nuit sien beauté sur mes lèvres ~~**~~ |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Exquisite! Very beautiful words wriiten here |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is so pretty. Thank you for sharing. Hugs, Ethel |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
I can think of only one thing to say -- Amazing! Beautiful Poetry. ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Indeed, your mother sounds as tho' she is a true Earth Angel ~ and might I add that you write as tho' you be an angel yourself! Love & Light, Linda [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (05-11-2004 12:00 PM).] |
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