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Some Things I Need To Write About......And Should
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Some Things I Need To Write About......And Should |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA 
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I love to write about my Love the one I adore and love with all my heart The one God has sent to me from above About the starry nights we look upon from the beautiful white beaches in the soft velvet skies The beautiful sunsets and the sunrises of a beautiful morn Of our love that we truly believe to be forevermore Never ending, with us always together About our life of love, of joy and happiness To write of our love together makes me feel better ALWAYS But...... There are past hurts that I NEED to face up to...to write about Happenings from previous times that I wish came no longer to mind And don't UNTIL I read some poem or hear some song or see some movie THEN the hurts, disappointments DARK MEMORIES of yesteryear come to mind I NEED to write of those terrible things those dark memories of yesteryear so that the scars will heal never to be remembered again NEVER again to be remembered To be forgotten FOREVER |
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MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
Touching poem |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometime back, one of our poets said "write outside of the box...write the you, that you never show." I fell across one of those poems the other day, and for some reason, I thought of you. Thought about reposting it, too...but it may be that I should just send you the link. Yes, Ethel, sometimes we have to write of those things that are the most difficult to speak of...sometimes that's where, and when, the healing will begin.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, my dear sweet Ethel Mae, I do so understand where you are coming from with this write. I for one, welcome poetry that comes from every aspect of your being and past experiences. I know that many of our readers have come to expect more up-beat poems from you and I. It sometimes shakes them up when we write otherwise and from less than sun shiny perspectives! That way we're not so predictable and we can blow off some less than angelic steam! lol Love ya lots, u know! Linda Lou  |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Ethel...Touching poem. We may not always be able to forget the past but by facing it we will become a better person.I hpoe all is well...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah sweet Ethel.. as you have seen on previous posts of mine.. I have written of the hurt and pain.. but, you know....it does help! When you are ready you will write it out. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Helen, I think writing is one of the best therapies of all time for just about anything. I liked the way you show the contrast in this poem and your choice of font styles, as well. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful and heartfelt. Great poetry! JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Let the healing pen of your words take the dark memories away to be remembered no more... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Ethel writing about past pains may be very good for the soul...I hope you find comfort and release. believe in what your heart feels... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
past or present they need to get out, past are the hardest, as you try with all you got to forget. i know this feeling. thanks for sharing |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful piece of sharing |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
My dear sweet friends. Ya'll are so understanding and compassionate. Always right here for me. Thank each of you very, very much!!  |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Ethel, a touching poem that pulled at my heartstrings. NEVER again to be remembered To be forgotten FOREVER I'm not sure our memories good or bad can ever be forgotten. But we can learn from the bad ones and ask God to heal us from them so that they no longer haunt us with a painful sting. I will offer prayers for you. Hugs for healing, Marti If you truly love Nature, you will find |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ethel Life is a mix of happy and sad times...poetry speaks of them all, as you should. Loved the honesty of this poem, and all that you write. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the best poetry does come from truth,you know? it truly shows here too in your words that u have shared from your deepest place, |
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