Open Poetry #32 |
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One-fifty-Seven, Digital Numbers |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Another of those nights, Shaken awake by the devil of worry. After three hours rest it disturbs me, One- fifty-seven, digital numbers Like the eye-shine of satin, Glow red from the stand by my bed. * The ghosts of things, Some started, some done Friends puzzled by silent phones Have I abandoned them? Certainly not in my thoughts, yet They must feel so, my mind staggers Under weight it would bear, If those good friends were lost. * Bills and weather, That makes them unpayable Problems explained, I'll call them tomorrow Children out on dangerous roads, Their fun makes me nervous I need traquilizers, So I bring up the link That takes me to passions.... * Down the list of sorrow and joy Word pictures conjuring Happy/sad images, Of loves on the rise Some asundering Musical tales, magically told Of G(o)od's and of (d)evil's Reading them two fold- things begin happening, Because I have entered Anothers reality Words become lullabies, Exciting yet tiresome, Making me sleepy; Good night to all, And thank you for being. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is a great place, huh? |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
*BIG smiles* ![]() Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ice Sounds like the ice is melting and reads like a wonderful write. Enjoyed |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
When dreams don't prevail... Words become lullabies, indeed they do! Enjoyed your thoughts, ford~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You shared your sleepless night very nicely. Better come on Pip than take the tranquilizers! Wishing you serenity. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
I do both. ![]() ![]() |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Another of those nights, One- fifty-seven, digital numbers Glow red from the stand by my bed. * Friends puzzled by silent phones Have I abandoned them? Certainly not ... They must feel so, my mind staggers Children out on dangerous roads, Their fun makes me nervous So I bring ... the link That takes me to passions.... * Down the list of sorrow and joy Word pictures conjuring Happy/sad images, Of loves on the rise Some asundering Musical tales, magically told ... I have entered Anothers reality Words become lullabies, Exciting yet tiresome, Making me sleepy; Good night to all, And thank you for being. ~*~ I love it! |
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MGROVES![]() ![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i too spend many a restless night here at pip "great place" to ease the mind, slow down the fleeting thoughts, calm the waves of emotions. thanks for sharing |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Yes, this is the place to be when those wheels start turning. You know someone is always out there doing the same thing. Try writing in a journal, too, during those times. You might be surprised what you find.... Gosh, look at all these voices of experience! ~K~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yanno Ford..this place does make you feel that way. This is a wonderful piece ..love it! I too come here at times for the same reasons. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
See, see what I mean...such support, such understanding...thank you all for your wonderful replies, and again for just being.. --------ice ><> |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
ice, In this post I felt the turmoil turn into warm fuzzies! Thought this line was interesting "Of G(o)od's and of (d)evil's" and I'll ask for your permission to use your words "And thank you for being." to express my thoughts. Nicely done. pictureme :-) |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Sometime we just need to take a deep breath and chew of a little piece of life and just do the best we can. Great write! JL ![]() |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
The opposites attract and crash into eachother, a magnificant explosion of miscreation. The maze is too complex, confusion spreads around. a small shot glass of wine before retiring usually helps...this was a magnificant explosion of words...very much enjoyed. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I Love It :-) |
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