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Open Poetry #32

Another World

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2004-05-10 08:02 PM

Another world
another love
broken and torn
falling down into
the depts of your
whims

The craddle you cry
from the bottle you
gulp down the smoke
you breath in is just
making it go on unstable
ground

The wind as it whips my
face the cold rain piearces
my skin my feet so cold
so lone I fall to the
ground.

Crawl to another world
where all the mistakes
are undone and turnt
around.

Long lost love is forgotten
and hearts are healed where
everyone loves one another
instead of using each other
as a shield.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-05-10 09:17 PM

"Crawl to another world
where all the mistakes
are undone and turnt
around."

Wow -- amazing lines, these!

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

2 posted 2004-05-10 09:34 PM

thanks

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

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