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Open Poetry #32

I cannot be named

MERCURY
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

0 posted 2004-05-10 09:25 AM

The situation is almost out of control,

Lounging on a sun-drenched beach,

I realise there may be overcrowding on public transport,

As I lounge on a sun-drenched beach.

My greatest lie ever told is coming back to haunt me,

Sipping my martini from my oceanic view,

Then again I cannot be named for legal reasons,

As I sip my martini from my oceanic view.

A familiar face is missing from my reflection,

Gorging into my free banquet,

The guy who dreamed to slash world poverty has slipped away,

As I gorge into my banquet.

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

1 posted 2004-05-10 07:16 PM

interesting progression...
I liked the repeats

INclan

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2004-05-10 07:27 PM

Enjoyed reading this and wanting to hear more!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-05-10 08:29 PM

That happens when youth slips from us --

Susan

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-05-11 03:24 AM

liked this

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