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MOON BEAM
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 MOON BEAM (A Candy Heart Poem) By: Noah Eaton 2/15/02 Waltz in the moon beams with me Under Eros's chandeliers Slip on your crystal slippers sweetly I'll lather you in the evenings starry tears We'll make love in these showers of moon beams Sipping through the jasmine night We'll climb pyramids of passion lovingly Embracing the soubrette cupid twilight Upon agate shores of our dreams We'll leave footprints behind of loves keepsakes As I rest with you on these sands of kersey Lying in loves hammock with you in the moon beams, in lovingly wake Come and dance with me in the moon beams May your honeyed words drip from your lips in amore Meet me in the moonlight, my darling We'll sway in heavenly kiss betwixt moonbeams galore  "You'll find something that's enough to keep you But if the bright lights don't receive you You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20 |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sweet Noah, I don't know how you do it! This is one of my favorites of yours. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Noah A poem of movement and heat... good combination of Logos and Eros...excellent choice of pictures, enjoyed, especially the end stanza..The flow is a little eratic, perhaps you have made it this way because love makes us stutter sometimes, I would like to hear you read this in person, I bet it would smooth right out. ________ice ><> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful write with beautiful pictures... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I'll lather you in the evenings starry tears WOW! I love that line, as well as your gentle flowing poem. Happy writing to you. Sadie |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Upon agate shores of our dreams We'll leave footprints behind of loves keepsakes These lines are particularly lovely... I like this very much, M'toe! *S* |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
You are amazing!!!! |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Oh Noah, this is absolutely incredible. you are such the romantic soul. Huggles and Happy Valentine's Day dear friend...Marti I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel |
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