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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-02-11 04:38 PM

No Place To Hide Me

there were
no places
to hide me
as I went
looking for you
in the spaces
between rain drops
too many
too scattered
so I melted
showing all
I was so
afraid to love
but more afraid
not to

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

1 posted 2004-02-11 04:48 PM

you know h,
there is a rain
that washes all
fear away...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-02-11 05:02 PM

"I went
looking for you
in the spaces
between rain drops"

Beautiful phrasing Helen...
Much enhjoyed.
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-02-11 05:26 PM

Helen, I can identify with this one. Makes me think of, "Better to have loved and lost, than never to have loved at all!" jo

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

4 posted 2004-02-11 05:39 PM

This kind of reminds me of the guy who was,
so skinny, he had to run around in the shower, just to get wet...

But seriously, what this really reminds
me of, is of a fragile and delicate heart,
who tried so hard to hide her true feelings,
but couldn’t, because she risked it all...

It’s amazing what love,
can make us do...

Wonderful Helen!

Richy

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

5 posted 2004-02-11 09:21 PM

In the night rain
There are shadows of drops
As drops fall into shadows
And no one sees
When they mix with tears
Beyond the rain touch
With their shadows of drops
Hides many things
Fears and tears
All that are there
Fears and tears
Left behind
Hidden
Safely
Nowhere

Gloom

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-02-12 04:41 AM

gawd! awesome!

Youngatheart
Member

since 2003-12-30

Posts 333

7 posted 2004-02-12 05:38 AM

Reminds me of the song by Garth Brooks..."The Dance"...I might have missed the pain, but I would have missed the dance...

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

8 posted 2004-02-12 11:28 AM

I was so
afraid to love
but more afraid
not to

Yes... absolutely beautiful! *S*

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

9 posted 2004-02-12 12:25 PM

Perfect.

Eric

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

10 posted 2004-02-12 09:22 PM

I sighed and I slouched at this emotional drain.

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