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Portrait of a Failed Experience
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Portrait of a Failed Experience |
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LiquidMidnight Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 50 |
I've been debating whether this poem is an uncomplete thought or is actually finished. I guess physical length shouldn't dictate whether a poem is finished or not. Anyways.... Portrait of a Failed Experience A question for my reverie In weeping desires do compose Why my thoughts are left ruminating On the nightstand, alongside my book of prose |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
looks like a done deal to me  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
W O W ! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Feels complete to me...I enjoyed reading it! |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Sometimes the less said the better...and in this case, it's the best! |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I enjoyed this.. it seems complete to me!  Hugs  Ethel |
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