Open Poetry #31 |
TWENTY OR LESS...#195 |
MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
TWENTY OR LESS…#195 Copyright 2004 by:MARK V SHELDON he feeds the birds that same stare every day empty hands half-empty bottles wrestling thoughts gripped by worn wonder You CAN make a difference: |
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Death Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 112Twilight |
"worn wonder" I like that line very much. Well done D "Sooner or later, Death makes a believer out of just about everyone." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad...I like 'em that way |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Good work! Grover. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Awwwwww --- excellent. I saw a man in Central Park with a bag and a bottle, and pigeons -- unwanted by most. Wow -- great painting. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent portrait Mark. Hugs~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MARK You're getting better. LOL Good one. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (02-11-2004 05:00 PM).] |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Thank you, D -- that one stuck out for me too. Yeah Dixie... Very often, they somehow seem more "real" that way... Thanks Grover -- glad you enjoyed. illiana: That's almost to-a-"t" what I pictured! Nancy, it did come across like a portrait, didn't it? Sy, that's the goal! Thank you, Sir. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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