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Open Poetry #31

untitled minimalism piece

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2004-02-09 05:12 PM

still
silent
shadows
light
inertia

kinetic energy to spawn

life?
Where?
here?
No.
Wombed?
Buried?

Suspended.

waiting
to inhale
to whisper
to sing.

©February 8, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-02-09 05:15 PM

"waiting
to inhale
to whisper
to sing."

Excellent Virginia...especially love the above closing words.

Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

2 posted 2004-02-09 05:15 PM

Simply lovely! Grover.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-02-11 05:12 PM

Vas -- Oh, I did like this one, indeed!

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