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Open Poetry #31

In my hazel eyes

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

0 posted 2004-02-10 08:01 PM

In my hazel eyes,
filled with broken dreams,
and behind the tears,
are my dormant fears.

I'm scared and alone,
filled with anxiety,
Coverd by my mask,
lays a painful past.

In you I will find,
Love and compasion,
Forgiveness and life,
and all of my self.

(^To God^)

Juju

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-02-10 08:03 PM

Juju, this was a wonderful poem and I really liked it.

....jo

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2004-02-10 09:55 PM

JuJu
I like this poem, an honest expression of your feelings, I especially liked the middle stanza....

enjoyed
______ice
><>

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

3 posted 2004-02-10 10:41 PM

Thank you. I am glad you liked the middle stanza, writing this poem made me happy. (:

-Juju_

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