Open Poetry #31 |
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With Your Love, I Come Alive |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia ![]() |
![]() Picture by Jim Warren * * * We walk along the shore Just as the sun begins to set Since I fell in love with you I don't need a safety net We stand facing one another As our fingers interlace I look deep into your eyes As I trace around your face You are my object of affection You help bring out my very best You give my life direction You are my north, south, east and west The seabirds fly above us As you kiss me tenderly I see love in all its glory As you move closer to me While I have your love beside me It's all I need to survive My life now has more meaning With your love, I come alive * * * "I love you, not for what you are, but for what I am when I am with you" I am in motion |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
A very well done piece Enjoyed the fine writing and the picture Gloom |
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garysgirl![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
While I have your love beside me It's all I need to survive My life now has more meaning With your love, I come alive sue, I always love your poems. It seems I relate to them all.... especially the love ones. LOL ![]() Hugs ![]() Ehtel |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Sue, Your poem comes alive, right off the page! this picture is passionate too! ~ARH ![]() love and hugs Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...I'd like to go swimming in those waters...James |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
Beautiful! |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
While I have your love beside me It's all I need to survive My life now has more meaning With your love, I come alive Yes... just this. *S* Beautiful work! *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
stunning! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Can't get much better than this! ![]() |
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