Open Poetry #31 |
When User Meets Loser |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
When User Meets Loser I thought that I would lose her if I didn't give her everything she wanted, and so I kept giving and giving. And then one day I didn't have any more to give. And you know what, I did lose her. When she realized I was not going to give anymore, I never heard from her again. Has this ever happened to You? JamesLee Febrary08 2004 |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Good poem... if you learn from this experience you're a winner! Grover. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Grover for responding...James |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yea the more i give the more i am shot down and the more i do, the more it gets sabbataged, sucks the life right out of me. i give heart and soul and the other things, people are not used, things are used, use things not people. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear James, I think in a relationship that works both give and receive. True love is unconditional, it IS. Thank you for giving us something to ponder ... to every effect there is a cause. Love, Margherita |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Can't say that it has but I sure have see it happen to others! Good one, James. Sorry if that is what happened to you, but if it is, you're better off without her! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) It should happen to no one, though you are a winner for now understanding how it works, dearest friend, if at first you don't succeed keep the faith, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nope, you got lucky, I'd say |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nope, and I agree with Dixie...You got lucky, learning early the true intent. Love is not always a bowl of cherries dipped in Cognac.... |
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