Open Poetry #31 |
I no longer exist for you |
nn Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 75 |
I no longer believe The words and the serious face I no longer accept The fragilities of the reactions I no longer want To care for the absence of a smile I no longer take The pity or the so said help For I need no help And you are unable to see. For I need no help. No advices nor untruth. No dissembled white on my grey. And you are unable to see That help was never what I searched in you. Not in that objective way. [This message has been edited by nn (02-10-2004 04:05 PM).] |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Good poem! Grover. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hit right to the quick. Well done. TD |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very much emotion shown in this one. Hugs to you Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I relate |
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