Open Poetry #31 |
Cough or not to Cough |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cough or not to Cough I coughed a vision on an ear Nothing much and not severe But low the sound did ring a bell And the odor of a smell Perhaps it was naïve of me To cough a mist upon your sea But I did not dispense a storm Only what I thought was norm If some symbol flew the cage And brought about this storm of rage Forgive me friend I did not think To me it was a simple wink. Lets let the bubble blow its cast I’m sure this cough won’t be the last We all have phantoms on the range Forgive me friend I’m just as strange. So let us toil a new begin And salve the boil erupts the skin. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Tis better to have coughed a mist than never to have coughed at all... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You ask for forgiveness so tenderly! Your words work like syrup ... the cough will be forgotten! Your poem is just great. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
LOL@Nan! I'm sure all is forgiven Sy! Now how about a spot of tea? ~Monday smiles, hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What wit! Good morning, Sy! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I loved this one, Seymour. You're just as cute when you're playful as when you're serious. Hugs Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan That's true my love. Margherita Love and hugs back my dear. Nancy, Ah yes tea and sympathy. Sunshine Love you too. passing, Thank you sweet. Ethel, You are a dear. |
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