Open Poetry #31 |
Snow Day |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Snow Day coated in candied confection glitters as if gold could it be a tiny inkling of what heaven will behold? January 15, 2004 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
simply beautiful |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Vas, Very nice to read your work, and it is so lovely as well, Cerenity |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
beautifull poem but if i see snow shovels hangin on them pearly gates i'm gonna ask to go to hell...enjoyed the beauty and simplicity of this one. Live like it's your last day... |
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Kristin Eve Member
since 2004-01-13
Posts 89On, Canada |
nice thought. very simple and sweet. "By the time you finish reading this... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is beautiful, Virginia. Hugs Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it very well could |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
One day we'll know for sure .... enjoyed Vas. Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Virginia, this is so lovely. I am always in awe when I see all that glittering. It is a heavenly touch of light. Love, Margherita |
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