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When The Snow Was Falling
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When The Snow Was Falling |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“WHEN THE SNOW WAS FALLING” by Bill Charles ~~~~ Snowflakes were falling this early morning when I woke, and I heard their softness as each one fell in rhythm with the sighs of your breath, and when we touched a fire burned when lips met in the dim of the light… Your eyes opened and danced in song with the crystals of ice as they gently fell and melted into each other when their journey ended and became one as they did, as we did this early morning when the snow was falling, and our lips met and began their burn of fire… ~~~~ |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
What a romantic morning this must have been Bill !! Whew !! Very, nice indeed. Chris  "At one glance |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Bill..this was so hot...hot enough to melt those snowflakes of yours! ~ARH  love and hugs Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Your eyes opened and danced in song'' sigh Bill, such a romantic piece...full of emotion and love..... ~~**~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nothing like a good snowfall to start the day! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Bill, this definitely is a most romantic scene ... love the association of melting snowflakes and melting hearts. Love, Margherita |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
all that from a little snowflake and so much more on a cold night with 2 warm hearts, aahh just lovely |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Such surreal beauty fills your crysttaline words, sweet friend, look beyond the snow globe and soon you will see your dreams are out of the glass and in your world, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very romantic, Bill! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
beautiful bill, but no more snow...........bring me some spring, mr. blue eyed soulman |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautful thanks  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
(Smiles) Juju |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
Bill, (sigh) A romantic setting romantic words I just couldn't feel the cold! pictureme |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Ah, it brings joy to my heart to see you write of such love |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Bill...Sounds like you have all the PIP ladies swooning like usual. Be careful all that snow in B.C. might start melting from this poem. Enjoyed...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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