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The Night Sailor
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The Night Sailor |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Why do you sail the shadows Letting the canvas billow only at night, What terror do you hide from? When seen will the terror come Turning flesh to cinder in the blinding light, Why is it so relentless? Who waits outside the darkness, Ready to shine reality causing the fright Binding you tight within shadows Gloom |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Your words reminded me of a scene from the movie "Pirates of the Carribean", one of my favourite movies. Great imagery in this piece of writing. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Your words reminded me of a scene from the movie "Pirates of the Carribean", one of my favourite movies. Great imagery in this piece of writing. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
I like this write also... so.... who waits?? |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Interesting, Gloom, but sometimes, there are reasons for sailing at night! Maybe, a schedule conflict! No, seriously, I enjoyed the writing as always. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
perhaps sailed in the day and shadows hidden when sun brightest overhead; I miss reading your posts lately. Excellent, as always Sadie |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very good writing. Grover. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's good that you care enough to ask...maybe that's all that's needed |
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