Open Poetry #31 |
State of the Cryosphere |
EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
State of the Cryosphere Weak permafrost delves deep. It clenches fist, broadening fissures already there. What was complete is thus flawed emptiness as measureless as totality. Just like celestial bodies thrown away upon insignificance heartache whorls into this vacuum. It reaches for timelessness seeking the intelligence of its' God. And what is God's name? Allah, Elohim, or Yahweh? Nay it is none of these. It is you...and this chasm in my heart is the fracture your leave-taking left. Thin ice builds naught. It merely chills the love once held ‘til grief crashes into brackish water. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Nice slant. Very good write! Grover. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
EvocativeVerse2 Good metaphors and excellent write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kevin...another great write! You have quite the talent sir. Hugs~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
"and this chasm in my heart is the fracture your leave-taking left. It merely chills the love once held ‘til grief crashes into brackish water." oh this piece is speaking from my head and you don't even know it!!! careful in there ... you might want to buckle up:-) LOVE THIS!!!! (mmhmm, will be printing) Snow "yet each man kills the thing he loves by each let this be heard, some do it with a bitter look, some with a flattering word" oscar wilde |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Two Words Sweet Friend...... LOVE IT Ribbits and ribbits :-) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can't even express the feeling of this |
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