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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 Lunar Solitude by Al Hogue * I found you waiting under the pine trees. The full moon hung in their branches like a silent spectator. I pointed to it in awe of its beauty. Distractedly you took the scenery in. Then you smiled and shouted into the night that your favourite sight was my heart displayed in my eyes. Traffic’s noise suddenly faded and we heard the moon’s whispers from above. Through our laughter we released all the tensions of the day and just enjoyed our love. It must have been the moon playing the trick but it was just fun to realize that we were dancing far away in a magical realm. * Love, Margherita |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ROMANTIC!! aaaaaaaaahhh...to be standing in the moonlight with someone you love. good job! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Margherita~ You just have to know that you took me into this romantic penning ... such a lovely glow from your heart~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Yes And yes again For your words Dave |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The magic in your art is undeniable. Very much enjoyed the view. TD |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
full of life love and mon, all the beautiful things |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very good writing. Grover. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Margherita Lovely, just lovely. |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Dearest One... You ALWAYS post the most delicious verses and sugarcoat them with simply amazing images. What a wondrous treat. Thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Then you smiled and shouted into the night that your favourite sight was my heart ~~ so delicate and tender....beautiful! ~~**~~ You read before you words I write- See before you my soul, spinning on waves of thought, painting memories of time |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
impressive! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enticing...James |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Margherita, this poem and the picture are beautiful....just as your heart is. Hugs Ethel |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This was lovely, Margherita. Makes me remember my first kiss. |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
This was such a comfortable read, I felt myself blending into the scene. You transported me under the moonlit tree. This is beautifully written! Thank you. Sadelite |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
very pretty  |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
*Big sigh and small smile* you lifted my spirits tonight with this simple, moving serine poem. Thank you for the sweet thoughts. ~Live and Laugh~ Because of you I laugh a little harder, smile a little more, and cry a little less |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very much enjoyed this margherita....the picture is great too..thank you.. Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Most romantic Margerhita , beautiful !! I live near a beach just like that .... I wish I could find romance waiting Hope |
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