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dingusjr
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since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

0 posted 2004-02-08 07:51 AM

Almost like a hummingbird
the quiet flutter of wings
hover near your head.

Loved ones gather
to say goodbye
You sigh

And smile as tiny angels
bend to softly kiss
and carry spirit away.

With joy you reach for them.

The chariot swings sweetly low
For you...all for you.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-02-08 07:56 AM

This touched me deeply, Larry. Thank you.

Youngatheart
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since 2003-12-30

Posts 333

2 posted 2004-02-08 08:11 AM

Oh my! It touched me too. Beautiful!

[This message has been edited by Youngatheart (02-08-2004 08:48 AM).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-02-08 09:39 AM

Larry~
And the world is richer for poets whose hearts are full of the tender of thoughts like this~

I have heard the flutter of angelic wings ... and yes, it's just like you said it was~

This is tender, tender~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

4 posted 2004-02-08 09:43 AM

Touched by your tenderness.
Love, Margherita

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2004-02-08 10:10 AM

Exquisite. Simply exquisite. I am putting this one in my library....

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Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

6 posted 2004-02-08 11:03 AM

Tender, beautiful in a sad way. Grover.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2004-02-08 11:05 AM

dingusjr
Lovely, lovely.

Martie

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California

8 posted 2004-02-08 11:15 AM

Sweetly sad and so tenderly written. *hug*

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

9 posted 2004-02-09 10:11 AM

Absolutely beautiful. *S*

Rdz9
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since 2003-03-16

Posts 142
MT, USA

10 posted 2004-02-09 02:11 PM

Hauntingly sad, yet very beautiful... Enjoyed.
-Rdz

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James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

11 posted 2004-02-10 07:49 PM

Ah, dingus -- we're going to have to find you a better name! Poetry like this needs a solid handle to match its class.

~~J

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

12 posted 2004-02-10 08:38 PM

ahhh...'tis blessed sorrow...the joy of mourning...tenderly and graciously described

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

13 posted 2004-02-10 08:43 PM

Larry, this was the sweetest goodbye I've read! Beautiful.

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

14 posted 2004-02-10 09:36 PM

Larry~

this is very inspiring! beautifully done

~~**~~
You read before you words I write-
See before you my soul,
spinning on waves of thought,
painting memories of time

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

15 posted 2004-02-11 07:07 PM

Silky...James

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