Open Poetry #31 |
Touching Shores... |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
There is no distance. Only the space of unmet desires as the ocean to our shores. Yet tides roll in a reach of pleasure. And through this taste of holy water... We touch. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice poem. Grover. |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
"holy water"... I really like that! McLean |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how sensual and soft |
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cinnamongirl Member
since 2003-02-02
Posts 217 |
And as always, the divine grace of your words have touched me. Thank you for this gentle caress of the soul. I love you, Moca |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Awwwhhhhh......this was magical! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful as always Eric... Your writing is.... ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is lovely, sweet friend, and may you always feel the ebb of loves soft passion caress your agate shores, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I can only echo here... Your talent is amazing. TD |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Beautiful metaphors, Eric. Just the right amount of words. Good work! -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I agree with Mark..nice writing and meaning Eric *s M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
.... and this touch is magical. Your words are born in upper space where truth and beauty embrace. I love you. Margherita |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Ericc , this was so softly "touching Hope |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
nice imagery..."holy water" is indeed a gem |
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jaicie114 Senior Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 750On the edge of forever |
Amazing, Merlin...thank you! Love and Light...jc This I know as Truth...we are all Beings of Light. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
sigh....amazing sir... ~~**~~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, yesssss. *S* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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