Open Poetry #31 |
A Woman's Place |
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Despite the turn of pages, centuries in silken cages A vital loss wept to be found In noble cross still left uncrowned As if the wind had scattered truth Brown and littered songs aloof This lineage by sisters made Tread down the footpaths bended blade Distinct the image sheathed in moon Lingers spirit fraught the draft too soon Fuller hips and candy lips His fingers play in fumbled trips Speak…the servants quarters shall be bleak And scent is banished there Into the cool white air Until the night has coveted my eyes Events that came to make me wise And softness is not weak for wear Nor timid could we speak or share For born within the belly of creations fire Her rightful place among God’s choir Beside her man…beside and pure desire An empress in the land of will And can…I can be found and fair Beside the might of what we share Not in the less or least of call But here beside, and hostess all To do and make from give and take Her robes illumined full and wake His friend and lover Kept kettle and cover Strong and weak my soul to peak The windblown slopes his eyes to seek And warm like sunshine o’er the fields The mistress to this banquet yields The smile contented in his eyes And love…a trickling force to bear The well collected in her care And bathed upon him ever so To reunite the shine and glow Of sun that sets upon his dine And once forgotten then resign Eclipse, the empty spots before the dawn Copyright Kkh 2/7/04 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Kathleen, a woman's place like your own is by far one of the most special places ever, sweet friend, every child learns so much of lifes beauty from lying in the womb of a loving mother and touched by her gentle grace and love, yay! (big angel hugs) Yay, this is a treasure, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful and much enjoyed write |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Once again I find your deep reflections and I am impressed by your talent of bringing them to paper in such beautiful poetic form. Love, Margherita |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
pure poetry, romance, the gods and godesses speaking through you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ There is a gentle ink within your thoughts~ You are such a remarkable writer and this stands as an excellent example of your ability to convey your thoughts so skillfully~ It is MY PLEASURE to read you endlessly~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You go girl! Superb, has such a feel to it that would go well with the times... Nicely done K. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A well disciplined write. Excellent! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i was wisped through every line, this is good TD! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kathleen...it is my honor to know a true poetess. Thank you. |
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