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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2004-03-15 07:34 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

* * *

Can I dream you into life
And make you my wish come true
Will you appear before my eyes
As my arms reach out to you

Or will you disappear from sight
And just slowly walk away
As my life goes back to normal
And it's just another day

You're my figment of imagination
The bountiful treasure in my chest
I have so many untold riches
With your love I have been blessed

When my dreams return at night
You appear before my eyes
How I savour every moment
For you'll be gone by sunrise

* * *

"In dreams and in love
there are no impossibilities"



I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2004 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-03-15 07:35 PM


Beautiful beautiful poem Sue...
and the picture?  Enchanting!!
Hugs~

Poetry is not an opinion expressed...
it is a song that rises from a bleeding wound
...or a smiling mouth.

         ~  Kahlil Gibran

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2004-03-15 07:36 PM


Very beautiful, dear Sue.
Love, Margherita

Ratleader
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3 posted 2004-03-15 07:39 PM


Not always.........
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It happens. It does happen.

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
4 posted 2004-03-15 07:42 PM


lovely writing, Sue

I love your pictures...

hugs
M

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2004-03-15 11:04 PM


NIce...James
WildPoet
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since 2003-11-10
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California
6 posted 2004-03-16 03:34 AM


Very strong. Very soft.

WildPoet

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
7 posted 2004-03-16 03:54 AM


Sue

Lovely write!

I really like this verse..
"You're my figment of imagination
The bountiful treasure in my chest
I have so many untold riches
With your love I have been blessed"
Nice flow and images...

Eric

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
8 posted 2004-03-16 07:43 PM


I think if you dream them into being, they will last a whole lot longer, than in real life.
Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15
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Ohio, USA
9 posted 2004-03-16 07:58 PM


Sue - you write such beautiful poetry with such deep feeling - loved this - Paul
passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2004-03-17 05:03 AM


always love your beauty
Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

11 posted 2004-03-17 05:39 AM


Beautiful Sue..quite quite beautiful..you write love poems unsurpassed....and the pictures that accompany them make them even more endearing..

Thank you..


Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
12 posted 2004-03-17 03:00 PM



You're my figment of imagination
The bountiful treasure in my chest
I have so many untold riches
With your love I have been blessed

blessed you are to feel this special feeling

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
13 posted 2004-03-17 05:13 PM


Simply exquisite!
Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
14 posted 2004-03-17 07:58 PM


Suetang - this poem is as gracious as the graphic, well done....

BC

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

15 posted 2004-03-17 08:09 PM


Very nice Sue, very nice

Dave

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