Open Poetry #31 |
Only In Dreams |
Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Picture by Josephine Wall * * * Can I dream you into life And make you my wish come true Will you appear before my eyes As my arms reach out to you Or will you disappear from sight And just slowly walk away As my life goes back to normal And it's just another day You're my figment of imagination The bountiful treasure in my chest I have so many untold riches With your love I have been blessed When my dreams return at night You appear before my eyes How I savour every moment For you'll be gone by sunrise * * * "In dreams and in love there are no impossibilities" I am in motion I am blue Love is an ocean I'm anchored in you - Shawn Mullins |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful beautiful poem Sue... and the picture? Enchanting!! Hugs~ Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very beautiful, dear Sue. Love, Margherita |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Not always......... /pip/Forum64/HTML/003209.html It happens. It does happen. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely writing, Sue I love your pictures... hugs M |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
NIce...James |
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WildPoet Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 205California |
Very strong. Very soft. WildPoet |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Sue Lovely write! I really like this verse.. "You're my figment of imagination The bountiful treasure in my chest I have so many untold riches With your love I have been blessed" Nice flow and images... Eric |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I think if you dream them into being, they will last a whole lot longer, than in real life. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Sue - you write such beautiful poetry with such deep feeling - loved this - Paul |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always love your beauty |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Beautiful Sue..quite quite beautiful..you write love poems unsurpassed....and the pictures that accompany them make them even more endearing.. Thank you.. Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
You're my figment of imagination The bountiful treasure in my chest I have so many untold riches With your love I have been blessed blessed you are to feel this special feeling |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Simply exquisite! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suetang - this poem is as gracious as the graphic, well done.... BC |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Very nice Sue, very nice Dave |
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