Open Poetry #31 |
Desire |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Desire my hunger for you tempts me past weakness a crave that edges next to starving greed to ache in flames that burn white hot in this passion that has never before known irresistible satisfying embrace tender are your moments where now has been lived a lifetime in your arms inspire now my yearning as I truly know desire |
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Youngatheart Member
since 2003-12-30
Posts 333 |
my hunger for you tempts me past weakness a crave that edges next to starving greed I really liked this part. Desire....you painted a perfect picture of it here....excellent!!! [This message has been edited by Youngatheart (02-08-2004 08:54 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big angel hugs) Awwwwwww, I understand how powerful desire can be and how it can hurt too, sweet friend, may the desire turn into comfort by the gentle whisper of love, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it just takes the right one, doesnt' it? great piece Helen, this gives me hope |
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Darren Junior Member
since 2003-09-30
Posts 30 |
I don't know about the rest of you, but... I need a cold shower! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
A raw clean taste of life.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WOW Helen.....beautifully sensual. Hugs~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I loved this! Thank You |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
tender are your moments where now has been lived a lifetime in your arms inspire now my yearning as I truly know desire Helen, I LOVE this!! |
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