Open Poetry #31 |
Wishing You |
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
~*~ I wish for you someone to touch your heart someone to climb a mountain with someone to break your fall and your reasons for taking risks. I wish for you someone who wants you on their side in spite of your lack of skill someone to bounce the ball back and bend a couple rules. I wish for you someone to dry your tears and lend a shoulder you can lean to someone who'll build a fire inside and keep the smoke out of your eyes. I wish for you someone to race against your heart and let you be the winner someone to dance with you all night and sweep you off your feet. I wish for you someone to light the candle wick someone to pour you wine and fill your glass until you glow. I wish for you that special someone who will come for you when you need them too someone to tuck the blankets in and dream a little dream of you. I wish for you someone to make your memories with and give you reason to remember I wish for you someone to touch your heart ~And so much more~ ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ (revised after deleting the whole darn thang) |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Wow Blusey, how did you know what all my wishes were? Especially... “someone who wants you on their side in spite of your lack of skill“... lol That’s got to be the main one for sure... Seriously, these are all such wonderful things to wish for anybody... I would be happy with any one of them... I wish for you all of these things too, and whatever else your sweet heart desires Thanks Bluesy This was the best! And so are you! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Lori, you touched the whole spectrum of our hearts' desires in such a beautiful tender way ... Do these magnificent beings exist? Probably, if we are willing to do the same, we might call forth this perfection. Your heart overflows and your pen refers truthfully and beautifully. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I will take this for myself and hug you |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I'm glad you brought it back...because you just gave me a pretty complete readout of things I have been wishing...and not for myself. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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nn Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 75 |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Glad to read your revision. I don't recall reading the original, but this is very good! Grover. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, thank you so much for wishing me and everyone happiness, you are an angelic friend to us all, yay, and I wish you the greatest happiness always too, yay! (does happy joy for everyone dance) I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Geez...that's a bunch of good stuff you're wishin' Bluesy. Throw in a lifetime supply of coffee ya think????? |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful . . . and may the same stars always put twinkles in your eyes, my friend. jwesley |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
a keeper for my files, Bluseygal |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
....... BUUuuMMmmp!..... Oopps! Oh, sorry Bluesy! Was that you? Clumsy me... Well... you know what? I'm glad I bumped into this poem anyway... Too many people didn't get a chance to read it... And now this way, they can I hope you're enjoying the weekend! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write Bluesy! I'm glad Richy popped it back up... Hugs~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
all that sweetness in your heart...all those wishes (i hope you saved some for yourself).. ..heres to making wishes come true!! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I truly do wish these things for everyone, including myself. In a perfect world of course. Thanks to all of you for reading, and for leaving your nice replies. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How very lovely... yes... all this and more. *S* |
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