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Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

0 posted 2004-02-06 11:13 PM

What more could I ask
than the warmth
of a breathless sigh
to drive the chill
from a February morn
and tether this heart
neath folds of cotton
Today the cock crows
in vain...

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

1 posted 2004-02-06 11:58 PM

hmmm....

this is like a double edge sword....

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2004-02-06 11:58 PM

(big angel hugs) This is a deep and poignant expression of your heart, sweet friend, we can all get tangled but know that you will be gifted with this simple wish, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Edder, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-02-07 12:06 PM

Nice writing.........jo

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2004-02-07 06:13 PM

Hey you...

this is as lovely excuse to stay under the covers as any I've ever read.

It's good to read you again, m'friend.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-02-08 05:28 AM

wow! you go!

dingusjr
Member

since 2003-09-24

Posts 415
Missouri

6 posted 2004-02-08 08:36 AM

Loved the last lines.....Larry

Youngatheart
Member

since 2003-12-30

Posts 333

7 posted 2004-02-08 08:45 AM

I am going back under my covers! Brrrrrrr!
Good job.

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

8 posted 2004-02-08 11:53 AM

Agreed

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

9 posted 2004-02-08 04:27 PM

ed...your wife must LOVE living with such a sweet poem every day...helen

Morning

steaming night
brings calm
morning
I wake
to your
soft snore
calming me
to your presence
I watch you
as you dream
and wonder
where your
unrestricted thoughts
take you
see your chest
raise and lower
in your
fantasy world
your heart
beats so deep
it pulses
in your neck
and then
I notice
your lashes
are the perfect
butterfly kiss

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

10 posted 2004-02-08 04:36 PM

A wonderful poem! Grover.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2004-02-09 10:13 AM

I love this! *S* Sounds like a wonderful way to start the day... *S* I'll just read and dream. *S*

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

12 posted 2004-02-09 10:35 AM

Usually I have a very literal mind...this time I needed to...goodness...

Ed~

you write so beautifully, but I can honestly say I value your friendship so much more....the poems are just icing...

"sit on top of the world and tell me how you feel...'cause what you feel is what I feel for you.."
~Dido~

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