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Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2004-02-06 09:13 PM

“TOGETHER WITH YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
It’s been three years knowing you close,
too much has been from distance afar,
I’ve traveled over rivers and mountains high,
from dusk until dawn I followed a star…

Once we touched in pleasures tender gift,
this lonely heart beat not once but twice,
my inner breath was lost from inside,
and each time since what you do is entice…

So I give of me this ring true in time,
to share with you always in wedded bliss,
thinking back then it didn’t take much,
all it took was one tender loving kiss…
~~~~

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

1 posted 2004-02-06 09:15 PM

awww very nice

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2004-02-06 09:18 PM

So I give of me this ring true in time,
to share with you always in wedded bliss,
thinking back then it didn’t take much,
all it took was one tender loving kiss…

Bill, sometimes that's all it takes to help
us to know what is right!!

Hugs,
Ethel

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-02-06 09:23 PM

Bill, what a sweet poem for a sweet heart, I am sure!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-02-06 09:52 PM

Bill~Very very nice indeed Bill.
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2004-02-06 10:22 PM

Once we touched in pleasures tender gift,
this lonely heart beat not once but twice,

Oh those are some nice lines, BC~
and your pen is a tenderly one!

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

6 posted 2004-02-06 10:42 PM

Bill...Another tender and romantic write. Another poem from a tender heart. ***Ivy Rose

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2004-02-06 11:32 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may you forever be together and each day just like Valentines forever and ever! (big angel hugs) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2004-02-08 07:08 AM

You show your tender romantic heart.
Sweet write.
Love, Margherita

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