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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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This pain that gnaws has taken hold working the truth, draining the confidence that silently closes the doors to the still of the night. Deep thoughts smother the laughter of remembrance and curse the moonchild, condemning the heart to darkness and fear to be lived. The cold ices the last of the warmth. Its melt tasteless in the face of passion. Reality fading into a whisper where only the invisible is seen. The mist is tapering, the haze dimming but the winter remains to torment the soul. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Such heartfelt writing. Hang in there, you're a great writer! |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Thoroughly enjoyed this excellent poem! Grover. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
a piercing hurt  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
weeks of snow and ice can do that to you  M |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Keep head and heartstrong, sweet friend, the spring will inevitably come and bring flowers in May and tulips beforehand, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The mist is tapering, the haze dimming but the winter remains to torment the soul. Aww, the seasons of love are never ending, and never easy. Hugs Maureen~ |
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