Eternal Love (a fantasy love poem)

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chinadude89
Junior Member

since 2004-02-03

Posts 31
Texas

0 posted 2004-02-04 07:06 PM

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I have always had an imagination about another world. And now I will bring that world to life. I hope you enjoy it!
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Flowers blossom in the Garden of Light,
As she smiles so bright.
I wonder around the Lake of Immortality,
And see her float upon it in eternity.
I spot her making a wish at the Fountain of Dreams,
As I wait by a crystal house by which I lean.
I stepped towards her and touched her hand,
From there we walked all over the land.
Her glittering eyes, personality, and angel-sweet voice,
Has given me a too-soon choice.
As we watched the sunset of the blue dwarf star,
I gave her this kiss that was far from bizarre.
It was the first kiss I ever had,
And I will treasure it with a first class 'glad'.
In this new world that I will forever live,
There is this eternal love which I will forever give.

In this war our families fought,
I may never see her again, I thought.
We have different backrounds and different
religions.
Because of this, we started the exhibition.
I drove to her house in a hover car,
I snuck in and realized that this was going to be hard.
I entered the main hall,
Which lies a family confrontation which I called to a halt.
I settled the feud and found her room.
I saw her standing on a window,
Then I knew there'd be doom.
I ran to her as she fell off,
And grabbed her leg and the sill with the other hand.
She looked at me and smiled happily.
I held on tight and pulled her up,
Then she told me her wish came true.

From then on we wished for the best.
In our eternal world,
In our eternal love.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2004-02-05 12:44 PM

This is very beautiful

Cold hands means a warm heart

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2004-02-05 05:46 PM

Enjoyed...James

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2004-02-07 01:42 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is such a heavenly dream, sweet friend, I too have deams like this ever so often as I still dream to hold loves hand for the first time, yay, may love always shine in your heart, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Phil, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

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