Open Poetry #31 |
Early, Early (Poem #12 Challenge – Martie’s, Some Midnight) |
Sunshine
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Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Early, Early (Poem #12 Challenge – Martie’s, Some Midnight) Sounds change when situations improve, circumstances supposing life could be better off now, as finance strengthens soundness in resonance-proofing windows, keeping life hums away… doesn’t surprise me that I would want yesterday’s window, when nips of cool fog snuck in on a California morning’s calico cat feet… and want that again not for reminiscing, but for sensing once more cool earth bouquets, from early morning tree flowers hanging in wait of fruition that greet waking senses, when next door sounds of greeting paperboys drift through the gray, when dew sounds drip in plink, before the bitter coffee ground me warm, before voices began a stirring storm, when hummingbird wings couldn’t be seen, but heard… early, early here in the gray mist of dawning, wave with me goodbye to bump in the night sounds then watch with me burning mists as sun ascents that one might find their way in following night dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"before the bitter coffee ground me warm, before voices began a stirring storm, when hummingbird wings couldn’t be seen, but heard… early, early here in the gray mist of dawning, wave with me goodbye to bump in the night sounds then watch with me burning mists as sun ascents that one might find their way in following night dreams." ============================================= WOW!! Challenge well met... But, oh, how I love the words above!! Beautiful Karilea...absolutely beautiful! Heart Hugs~ ~ I like not only to be loved, |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
hi Karilea Sure wish I'd known you back then...and was your neighbor! "a California morning’s calico cat feet…" Wonderful recall of window blessings! |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hey Sunshine. This is great. Seems you and I are both thinking in terms of windows today. (Snicker.) That is funny since I work for a window manufacturer. Love this piece. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"before the bitter coffee ground me warm, before voices began a stirring storm, when hummingbird wings couldn’t be seen, but heard…" Sunshine -- outstanding, as always! |
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