Open Poetry #31 |
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I'm a Filthy Rich Kid! (tis is my only comedy poem so tell me wat u dink!) |
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chinadude89 Junior Member
since 2004-02-03
Posts 31Texas |
Lotto jackpot! Six million bucks! Have some money, NOT! And I always thought life sucks! I mustn't share anything, My new estate will hold. Not even a penny that falls with a ding, But I guess I'll share some mold. I'll dance upon thy brand new floors, With shiny leather shoes. Hmm, stuff, thou shou buy more! There's just so much money to lose! How about an Xbox? But I also must protect my money, Then I'll buy a giant lock! My days have just gone from dark to sunny! A big screen TV! A dozen chandeliers! Music from MTV! And many crystal mirrors! A machine gun for protection. A limo with great speed. Fancy pizza for the digestion, And much more foods to eat! I'm the happiest kid alive. I'll have everything I'll ever want, But then there'll be so much to flaunt, But then there's just so much to derive. I hate this incognito! My parents bought the ticket, they're the wiz! I wish to just secure my treasures with the powers from Magneto, But hey, I'm a filthy rich kid! |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
![]() (giggles in delight) This is sooooooo cute, sweet friend, hehehe, I love it, the rhymes are right on and really shape up the emphasis of this clever poem! (sigh) They spoil him to the Nth degree, hahaha, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! ![]() May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
sounds real fun...hey, you could turn it into some rap song (i like rap, hope you do too!) a belated welcome to the forum! |
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Michelle_loves_Mike![]() ![]()
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Sounds like a kid headed for lonely times,,, Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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