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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-02-05 05:43 PM

I would promise
to turn those curves with you,
to stop the moments
time and again
leaving you
with the last of my words
to mend the aches
and erase the pain.

Press those doubts to my heart
until the warmth penetrates
and dissolves the forever
into now, and allow the
in-between to sandwich
yesterday into tomorrow's
happiness.

This I promise...

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2004-02-05 07:33 PM

A beautiful promise, Maureen!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-02-05 07:34 PM

What a wonderful heartfelt promise!
Beautiful Maureen!
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

3 posted 2004-02-05 08:26 PM

I would promise
to turn those curves with you,
to stop the moments
time and again
leaving you
with the last of my words
to mend the aches
and erase the pain.

Beautifully expressed! Enjoyed...

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2004-02-05 09:06 PM

M.

I do believe you would...such a beautiful
statement.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2004-02-05 09:08 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and may loves promise forever echo on and greet you both with the many colors of the sun you thought you'd never see, God Bless You, this is wondrous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

6 posted 2004-02-08 03:35 PM

Very good one M

ditto

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2004-02-08 03:37 PM

A very sweet promise, Maureen.
Very loving.

Hugs

Ethel

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

8 posted 2004-02-08 07:21 PM

Press those doubts to my heart
until the warmth penetrates
and dissolves the forever
into now, and allow the
in-between

Very promising and just so lovely, this~

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

9 posted 2004-02-08 07:26 PM

You have great talent... loved this poem! Grover.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-02-10 04:29 AM

how'd I miss this? What a beauty!

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